Wednesday, 17 June 2020

Session 6 Error correction

https://manuale.edu.ro/manuale/Clasa%20a%20VII-a/Limba%20moderna%20engleza/SCARTKLETTSRL/#page/35/3


https://songactivityfactory.com/2020/05/29/onerepublic-didnt-i-teaching-english-with-zoom-using-songscambridge-english-first-fce/


the plot = the topic = subiectul/ ideea principala
characters - personaje

The plot - M, A,C
Characters

CHARACTER 1
He wore a surgical mask in public not to keep from catching a virus, but to keep people away from him.
Who is he? Use the following prompts to create a character:
Name: Jafar
Age: 21
Nationality:Egyptian
Occupation: Icecream seller
Marital status: Single
Hobby: Making icecream with his feet
3 adjectives to describe his personality: Selfish, Coward, Careful, Wise/Thoughtful

Why did he want people to stay away from him?
-because he doesn't have a mouth
-because he is antisocial
-because he has a bad breath
-because he doesn't want people to remember his face
CHARACTER 2
She ran out of money, so he had to stop playing poker.
Who is she? Use the following prompts to create a character:
Name: Mirela
Age: 18
Nationality: Romanian
Occupation: vlogger
Marital status: single
Hobby: recording herself
3 adjectives to describe her personality: Confident, Egocentrical, Funny

Why did she run out of money?
-because she had some expensive surgery at her lips and her breast
-because she bought expensive make-up and clothes
-because her boyfriend used her money to play poker
-because she was not entertaining enough
TASK 1
Use the characters we have created above in order to write a story about them : - introduction ( 1) / body 2-3) / conclusion (1). BE FUNNY !
Write your composition under this post.
Deadline 23rd June, at noon . 
TASK 2
Check my correction to your corrections/ homework you posted last session.
Post again the composition in a correct form !


11 comments:

  1. A farting man



    One day, in the afternoon, a vlogger named Mirela went outside to make some vlogs for her youtube channel.
    It was cool outside that day and she was walking around filming her doing challanges. She saw a ice cream
    truck, and she went to check the truck. She approached slowly and she looked thru the window. She couldn't
    see anything in the truck. She turned on the flashlight on to check what is there and she saw a colored man
    making ice cream with his feet. She wanted to run but the ice cream feet maker man stoped her and said:
    -Uai ar iu raning madam? Da ice cream is gud. She was scared and didn't say anything but she replied:
    -My question is, why the heck do you make ice cream with your feet? Is this a wierd fetish?. The ice cream
    feet maker man didn't respond. The girl said: -Tell me your name at least. He said his name is Jafar.
    The girl wanted to run but Jafar said let's both go. She didn't have a choice so they both go.
    Jafar was walking and farting and he was tasting his inside nose and asked Mirela: -Du iu uant some?
    She replied: -Are you on drugs or something? and he replied back with: -E Varutuuuuuu. What is varutu?
    she asked, but he didn't respond. When he said "Varutu", Mirela started to fart a lot. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?"
    she asked Jafar with no response. A baby yoda cat approached them and said. "You did it...". They said at
    the same time "What?". The baby yoda cat was farting very hard and he transformed in a unicorn. The unicorn
    had three eyes and a fat back. He was farting as well but he farted minecraft swords. Jafar and Mirela took
    the swords and fought with the sexy unicorn. And after that, when they defeated the unicorn, a good looking,
    very charming, never seen before, a beautiful man named Andrei was staring at them and said "You shall not
    pass" and he revealed his beautiful body and everyone fanted and farted. Mirela from that day is still searching
    for Andrei and Jafar, ummm, I think ummm, he is making ice cream with his feet and he is high all the time.

    -Andrei

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    1. ...She saw aN ice cream truck ..
      she looked thrOUGH the window.
      ...what there WAS ( ESTI IN TRECUT CU CELELALTE VB)
      Is this a WEIRD fetish?....
      ...his name WAS Jafar.
      She didn't have a choice so they both WENT ....
      everyone faRted and farted. From that day ON MIRELA HAS BEEN still searching
      for Andrei and ...


      HILARIOUS ,
      good looking,
      very charming, never seen before, beautiful man named Andrei !

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    2. A farting man



      One day, in the afternoon, a vlogger named Mirela went outside to make some vlogs for her youtube channel.
      It was cool outside that day and she was walking around filming her doing challanges. She saw an ice cream
      truck, and she went to check the truck. She approached slowly and she looked through the window. She couldn't
      see anything in the truck. She turned on the flashlight on to check what is there and she saw a colored man
      making ice cream with his feet. She wanted to run but the ice cream feet maker man stoped her and said:
      -Uai ar iu raning madam? Da ice cream is gud. She was scared and didn't say anything but she replied:
      -My question is, why the heck do you make ice cream with your feet? Is this a weird fetish?. The ice cream
      feet maker man didn't respond. The girl said: -Tell me your name at least. He said his name was Jafar.
      The girl wanted to run but Jafar said let's both go. She didn't have a choice so they both went.
      Jafar was walking and farting and he was tasting his inside nose and asked Mirela: -Du iu uant some?
      She replied: -Are you on drugs or something? and he replied back with: -E Varutuuuuuu. What is varutu?
      she asked, but he didn't respond. When he said "Varutu", Mirela started to fart a lot. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?"
      she asked Jafar with no response. A baby yoda cat approached them and said. "You did it...". They said at
      the same time "What?". The baby yoda cat was farting very hard and he transformed in a unicorn. The unicorn
      had three eyes and a fat back. He was farting as well but he farted minecraft swords. Jafar and Mirela took
      the swords and fought with the sexy unicorn. And after that, when they defeated the unicorn, a good looking,
      very charming, never seen before, a beautiful man named Andrei was staring at them and said "You shall not
      pass" and he revealed his beautiful body and everyone fanted and farted. From that day on Mirela has been still
      searching for Andrei and Jafar, ummm, I think ummm, he is making ice cream with his feet and he is high all the time.

      -Andrei
      Eu am vrut sa zic fanted and farted, nu farted and farted
      m-am referit ca toti au lesinat si au tras un partz :))

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  2. Homework

    The interview

    Last month,on a hectic afternoon of August in New York,when tourists were visiting the city and busy people were walking fast down the streets with work to do,Mirela a famous vlogger from Romania decided to interview someone who is used to live in such a crowded city,hoping that she is going to get a lot of views on YouTube.
    She took her video camera and set off to the centre of the city.Once she got there Mirela couldn't choose only one person to do the video with because there were too many options and she was surrounded by a lot of interesting people,but in the end she picked an ice cream seller.Mirela thought that an ice cream seller was a good choise because he is having conversations every day with different kinds of persons during his work and he could have more opinions about how people live in such a big city.
    At first the ice cream seller was very shy but she succeeded in getting answers from him.His name was Jafar and he was an Egyptian which moved in New York six years ago,when he was only fifteen and he started selling and doing ice cream for surviving because he had no money.Jafar's hobbie was making ice cream with his feet:such a weird hobbie.
    At the end of the interview Mirela was satisfied by the answers she got so she thanked him for giving her his time.She edited the video and post it and it had a bunch of views.

    Mihaela

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    1. Last month,IN a hectic afternoon of August ...
      ...decided to interview someone who WAS used to live in such a crowded city,hoping that she WAS going to get a lot of views on YouTube...
      ...to MAKE the video...

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    2. because he HAD conversations every day...
      how people liveD in such a big city....
      he was an Egyptian which HAD moved in ..
      Jafar's hobbY ...

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    3. Homework

      The interview

      Last month,in a hectic afternoon of August in New York,when tourists were visiting the city and busy people were walking fast down the streets with work to do,Mirela a famous vlogger from Romania decided to interview someone who was used to live in such a crowded city,hoping that she was going to get a lot of views on YouTube.
      She took her video camera and set off to the centre of the city.Once she got there Mirela couldn't choose only one person to make the video with because there were too many options and she was surrounded by a lot of interesting people,but in the end she picked an ice cream seller.Mirela thought that an ice cream seller was a good choise because he had conversations every day with different kinds of persons during his work and he could have more opinions about how people lived in such a big city.
      At first the ice cream seller was very shy but she succeeded in getting answers from him.His name was Jafar and he was an Egyptian which had moved in New York six years ago,when he was only fifteen and he started selling and doing ice cream for surviving because he had no money.Jafar's hobby was making ice cream with his feet:such a weird hobby.
      At the end of the interview Mirela was satisfied by the answers she got so she thanked him for giving her his time.She edited the video and post it and it had a bunch of views.

      Delete
  3. The ice-cream man

    One day, a popular vlogger named Mirela went to get some ice-cream
    from a popular ice-cream maker in her town named Jafar. Although he
    was egyptian and came from a hot part of the world he was an expert
    in making ice-cream.
    Jafar greeted Mirela whe she knocked o the ice-cream truck and
    asked her what she wants to eat. When Mirela saw him, even though
    she couldn't see half of his face because of the mask he wore she
    fell in love with him. Mirela bought a ton of ice-cream because she
    was still sad for giving money to that guy who spent his money on
    playinng poker.
    Jafar, being a nice guy asked her what was wrong and listened
    carefully to everything she said until the end of the story. He
    asked if he could help her with anything and MIrela said if he could
    tell people who bought ice-cream from him about her youtube channel
    and she will help him get more customers by giving his store a
    shoutout in every video she made.
    Since that day Jafar's became a multimilionare and Mirela became a
    huge vlogger with over 100 million subscribers.

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    Replies
    1. ...a popular ice-cream maker in her town named Jafar ( JAFAR IS THE NAME OF THE MAKER OR THE TOWN ?).

      Delete
    2. Jafar greeted Mirela wheN she ..asked her what she wantED to eat. When Mirela saw him, even though
      she couldn't see half of his face, (because of the mask he wore) she fell in love with him.
      ...on playing poker.
      ...and she wOULD help him get more customers

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    3. The ice-cream man

      One day, a popular vlogger named Mirela went to get some ice-creamfrom a popular ice-cream maker named Jafar in her town. Although he
      was egyptian and came from a hot part of the world he was an expertin making ice-cream.

      Jafar greeted Mirela when she knocked on the ice-cream truck and
      asked her what she wanted to eat. When Mirela saw him, even though
      she couldn't see half of his face (because of the mask he wore) she
      fell in love with him. Mirela bought a ton of ice-cream because she
      was still sad for giving money to that guy who spent his money onplaying poker.
      Jafar, being a nice guy asked her what was wrong and listened
      carefully to everything she said until the end of the story. He
      asked if he could help her with anything and Mirela said if he could
      tell people who bought ice-cream from him about her youtube channel
      and she would help him get more customers by giving his store a
      shoutout in every video she made.
      Since that day Jafar's became a multimilionare and Mirela became a
      huge vlogger with over 100 million subscribers.

      Delete

Session 18

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